kevin25a

I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters. I did love this story though and I like the idea behind it. Most stories bases on or using ...

I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters. I really liked this story though, and look forward to you continuing it. I'm confused why you would skip ...

I will start by saying I haven't read any of your previous chapters, that said, this was really good. I look forward to your next chapters. I will have to ...

I will start by saying I haven't read any of your previous chapters. I'm more of a writer than a reader normally. But I really liked this story, it was ...

I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters but I intend to. I absolutely loved the story, I love detective stories and crime stories. You did a ...

Oh. My. God. Zodiac killer series, I love these! I'm so looking forward to your next chapter. I really hope you write it and publish it soon. Personally I was ...

I agree with the comment before me. Personally this is a perfect happily ever after way to end it. But the anime fanboy in me would be outraged by such ...

Well like the last couple chapters I literally JUST reviewed, I loved it. It's absolutely amazing. I don't usually get so drawn into a story. I'm more of a writer ...

Well that's... unique. An immortal trying to commit suicide. If I understood that right. Not that I'm a stranger to drowning, I nearly did twice. I'm curious how she hides ...

I don't deny I started here but will definitely be going back to the others. I do like starting a part or already completed story though, means less wait time ...

This was really good, definitely my new favorite story on YWS. I really hope you continue it, he isn't wrong about Ohio. It's raining every season if you live in ...

I started on chapter 7 but so far this is the first chapter that didn't seem like a bunch of disconnected thoughts and ideas. The story is alright, but not ...

She spiked the punch bowl lol. Seriously a sedative in water, or tranquilizer maybe. How common and cliche, he is paranoid but when a hot chick walks up he lets ...

Well I will start by saying I started on this chapter. I saw a CSI episode just like this lol. Crazy surgeon tries to attach a limb taken off. Although ...

So she died at the end? I have to say I only read this chapter, but feel I understood it for the most part. At least you used real vampires, ...