kevin25a

Um I figured I should mention Darrin is a guys name, so that will throw many people off and confuse them. I'm confused as to what happened in the last ...

I think changing the title too "One hour in fifty four years" would make more sense. Since he was gone for fifty four years, and they only had one hour ...

This is a really good story, definitely unique way of magic. I really look forward to it and would love to know when you publish the next chapter. I noticed ...

This was really good, I will say I started here but have every intention of reading the previous chapters. This was really really good. The cliche bad timing for the ...

I love what you got going here. I absolutely love the story, it's awesome. Futuristic, deals with a rarely used idea, and a mad scientist. Every story like this needs ...

This was really good,I definitely didn't expect half of it to be added so soon. I know I expected most of it, but at least half took me by surprise ...

This was really good, I'm definitely a fan. Have a follow and a fan. :) I really like the uniqueness of your idea and look forward to where you will ...

This was really good, just like the last chapter. But it's never so simple of course, they will be caught on the way out, or as they approach the dark ...

This was really good, I'm confused as to what you mean by warped tunes. You started making it seem like she was driving, then suddenly walking up to a downed ...

This was really good I look forward too your story continuing, I wish I followed it sooner. I'm pretty sure I got the idea for the will o wisps. A ...

Coins are earned by doing reviews in the green room. First publishing is free, along with the first four gifts given. There is also a free publishing day each month ...

At first I actually thought I would be reading about paper planes. This was a good perspective on life, things aren't always as they seem. Although that saying is very ...

I loved this chapter more than the last, this story is really good. Defiantly planning to follow the story to its end. I would like to ask if she is ...

Ok this sounds a lot like divergence. Like divergence dealing with time travel instead of clans. Like divergence and back to the future combined. Or written by a dr who ...

I will start by saying I haven't read any of the previous chapters. That said I did like the story, I love crime stories. I will probably go back and ...