keeperofgaming

Thanks for the review, if you are curious, I am still posting chapters on Royal Road as I am able to schedule those. Once I'm back here I will post ...

This story was the first big one I actually wrote and i have written it to completion. I do plan on doing a rewrite when chapter 150 is released. But ...

Love the new style, and thanks for the review

You have an interesting theory and I really like all of the other criticisms you made it made sense and I may lessen the impact there.

Thanks for your review. I can't wait to see your other ones.

Thanks for the review, though.

This part was written a long while ago so I can understand the issues with the writing. If you check out the prime control, my other story, you can see ...

Thanks for the review

Understood

Thanks.

Thanks for the review, and I agree with the assessment relating to the 3 chapter, but I am busy and don't have time to gather points, unfortunately. So, until I ...

of course, the rewrite will probably change that

Interesting way to see it, I somewhat agree with you.

The beginning is actually purposefully vague. I would explain, but that would be a massive spoiler, sorry

Glad to see you liked it. Thanks for the review