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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 36
OOOF Dang, Kita met the beast. When I smiled: This was awesome, Kita met Leiytning's demon side and immediately recognized that it wasn't him. I love that fact, and I ...
Apr 16, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 35
I knew she would do that. When I smiled: Thundur's wake up was cool, I like how all of them were in a state of confusion, and she most of ...
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Re: The origin of Anika
Hello, I'm back with my somewhat Familiar style. When I smiled: Eerie, the shadow took away Natalie. Nooooo. Anika's not understanding was believable and sad the whole time. I only ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 34
THAT WAS TIMBUR. I thought it was Thundur. Welp, review time. When I smiled: Timbur's stubbornness was shown in full force. I half expected Zin and Seyber to knock him ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 33
Spicy. When I smiled: The contrasting tale, yet not contrasting too. Corellia speaking as though they are the victims, the Zyreans speaking on victimhood too. However, the Zyreans also mentioned ...
Apr 9, 2024 -
Re: ******
I feel like this is relating to Leightning. His ferociousness is clear to many as he embodied a true demon that even Timbur feared, when it was neccesary. He is ...
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Re: In God's hands
God is where truth is. Many people are so swallowed by hatred that they can't comprehend that simple fact. People will strike out, and ignore the truth, because that is ...
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Re: Misty Mourning - Ch. 1 Ep. 1
This seems interesting. When I smiled: Elias seems like a good kid, his caring for his sister to the point that he forgets when he promised to visit and simply ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: When Rose met Katie
Yo, pet semetery vibes. I felt chills when it showed Rose's happiness at seeing Katie again. Internally, I was like, "Rose, run RUN RUN!!!" This was so eerie, like, knowing ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 32
I'm back and you're still an avocado. Well, lets go with my now familiar template. When I smiled: Thundur's attempts to trick Kita were fun and show a slightly playful ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 31
What a fun thing to return to after Easter. When I smiled: Thundur and Leiytning do somewhat care for Kita, and watching them care is so adorable. The fact that ...
Apr 1, 2024 -
Re: Pressure Point
When I smiled Arya is an assassin. Someone who needs to kill. She is told to kill her one and only friend, but there is a lot to unpack. First, ...
Mar 22, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising: Prologue
Late to the show but let me apply my Template When I smiled This was adorable and sad. The child understanding both death and responsibility was tragic. The Fact that ...
Mar 22, 2024 -
Re: Chapter one
Really like it, but there are some errors: “you're ship is going to blow.” to "Your ship is going to blow." all around me I'm to all around me, I'm ...
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Re: Unspoken Melodies
This is beautiful. When I smiled: The shift from crush to unbreakable friendship was awesome, and I like how there was a moment of absence, making the bond go stronger. ...
Mar 15, 2024
