kaylamarie004

I have to be honest and say this poem needs improvement. For starters, the poem would look a whole lot better if it was in a proper poem format. There's ...

This is awesome. I wanted to sing it out as I read it. Not only did it make sense and I can relate to it, but it also rhymes which ...

I really like this poem because it has potential and I can relate to it. What I also like most about it, is that it stands the test of time. ...

This is a good poem and I love the purpose you put to it. What I didn't like was that it wasn't a rhyming poem, yet you still didn't complete ...

I don't know about other people, but I for one didn't really enjoy this poem. I think it was poorly writtent in various ways. It could have been better with ...

I absolutely admire this poem. It's lovely and challenging to the reader. I couldn't find any error that needed to be corrected from where I stand. I could already picture ...

This is such a beautiful poem. I don't think it needs any major corrections. I just think you should work on keeping the reader interested in the poem and wanting ...

I like the rhyming words you used so that the words would flow flawlessly among the topic. What I didn't like was that you will go on and on about ...

I love this story. You actually interested me to reading the whole thing. The way you described how the man felt about his new wife was amazing and, your choice ...

I have to say I wasn't really interested in this poem. I think it should have been written differently in a way that one word is not by itself because ...

I have to say that I didn't get anything this poem was trying to say. I understand poems could be written in anyway the writer wants it to be, but ...

I love this poem. It's inspiring and speaks a million stories in just a few stanza's.You speaked your mind perfectly and readers can easily follow what your trying to say. ...

Outstanding poem! It was so good; I absolutely loved it. It rhymes, explains, and writes itself out. However I do think you could of left some sentences out like: "The ...

This is a really good poem. It can be used for anything in life. What I was thinking in my mind while reading this poem is, that life is full ...

I like this poem because it also tells a short story along with the poem. I love poems that rhyme more than I love poems that don't, so I really ...