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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Delusive Savior

    First of all, even more than I enjoyed your poem I love your signature. Just saying. Your poem was brilliant. It seemed rather personal, but I think if you're always ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Oh-So Stellar

    I loved this poem. It was wonderfully poetic and very creative. I loved the title, in fact it's why I chose to read it. But the more I think about ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Ending.

    Wow, powerful images in this poem. I was a little confused however why it switches from the person being injured and having glass in their hand to them drowning. Maybe ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Alone?

    I really like this poem. It's very realatable and the way you organized it, so that the begining makes a statement that the ending explains is really nice. I don't ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You'd Hurt Me

    I didn't exactly like this poem and I thought it was sort of cliche... but maybe not in a bad way. Most of the poems I've read by the Young ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Maybe, Maybe Not

    I get what it's like to just post a piece of something bigger... which I hope this is part of. I didn't understand exactly what was going on, but I'm ...

    Nov 30, 2009


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World