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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Delusive Savior

    First of all, even more than I enjoyed your poem I love your signature. Just saying. Your poem was brilliant. It seemed rather personal, but I think if you're always ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Oh-So Stellar

    I loved this poem. It was wonderfully poetic and very creative. I loved the title, in fact it's why I chose to read it. But the more I think about ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Ending.

    Wow, powerful images in this poem. I was a little confused however why it switches from the person being injured and having glass in their hand to them drowning. Maybe ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Alone?

    I really like this poem. It's very realatable and the way you organized it, so that the begining makes a statement that the ending explains is really nice. I don't ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You'd Hurt Me

    I didn't exactly like this poem and I thought it was sort of cliche... but maybe not in a bad way. Most of the poems I've read by the Young ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Maybe, Maybe Not

    I get what it's like to just post a piece of something bigger... which I hope this is part of. I didn't understand exactly what was going on, but I'm ...

    Nov 30, 2009


If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming