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Hello!!! Wow, this is a great story. I'm astonished at this piece of work you've managed to produce! It really does commemorate the 9/ 11 attack. I love it. It ...

Hello there! I think this was a pretty good story!! I love it!! There is only one question I ask you to answer, Who was the speaker at the end ...

This was a good poem. I like how you started it. It caught me as striking. But the end...... The end didn't fit very well. It didn't have an awesome ...

Hey There! I thought this was a pretty awesome story! I laughed at the ending. "And that's why I hate painting my nails." Amazing ending. Couldn't be better! I love ...

Hello Abbie! Well, I thought this poem was pretty spectacular. I liked the description, but a few things kept nagging me. It's kinda insane I don't like the kinda, but ...

Hello there! First to say, THIS IS A GREAT BOOK!! I am totally loving it! I like everything you said, but there are a few nitpicks!!! A large group from ...

Hello! I thought this was a very touching story, hearing about one who conjures dreams. I like the description. It made me so happy. I love it how you explained ...

Hi! I thought this was a great story, but I think you need to work on your grammar. It kept nagging me, "Incorrect use of grammar!!!!" My name is Dee ...

Hello! I thought this was an awesome story!! There are a few nitpicks that I would love to point out, but I really do think this deserves around first place ...

This is an exciting poem. I have never read anything like this. But I don't like it that much. I suppose it was too short for me. I guess you ...

I can say it is a bit awkward how you enter in the I love you! stuff. Shout! Cry! Fall! But we’ll catch you, He and I. Drink your own ...

This is pretty good, but there are a few nitpicks: 1. Try putting these lines into stanzas, as it will help others understand better. 2. I agree, don't put so ...

Good Poem. But I can just say that you need to smooth it out a bit. Some words don't go with the flow. But what I don't understand is how ...

haha, this is a very funny short story. I can't say I hate it, so I like it!!! I like how you describe how the main character keeps hurting him/herself ...

Pretty good, but a few nitpicks My heart has suffered, Because of this thing. It can’t last any longer, It can’t take this horrible sting. The horrible sting....... I think ...