katiehorsie

Thanks :D

And it is now all fixed

Thank youuu. I was planning to rework that little back story in later on because it does parallel to part of her life a while back. And the point of ...

You're review is very helpful. And yes, it is kind of medievalish, so I am trying to mess with how the people speak based on their backgrounds (though I did ...

Haha it wasn't really supposed to be a short story. I am just kinda bad at classifying my stuff sometimes, so they end up in random categories.

Thanks. ^^

Well, some of this is if you don't break the lines up

Thanks for that (in a non sarcastic way). I do admit I need to read and everything more. I can do things like write short stories and such almost flawlessly ...

Thanks to people who read my poem, and yes, without the dream I had, it would most likely not be nearly as sad as it is to me. But for ...