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Re: Wolfe
Misslady101, I wanted to review your short story chapter…I put my notes in UPPERCASE hope they show up when I post…. Please read my chapter 1 – Sirena in return ...
May 18, 2012 -
Re: Untitled-Chapter One
Hey, I'm going to review yours. Hope you review mine. I forgot to copy link before I started replying, but it's Sirena - Chapter 1. Just posted... I copied and ...
May 15, 2012 -
Re: Symphony
This is a very good poem. You did very good focusing on on the point, it seems deep, and in a good way, and I liked it very much. Does ...
May 10, 2012 -
Re: The Pitied Might
I think you need to add a longer poem here, another stanza or two. Nothing really happens or catches my interest. I like how it rhymes.
May 8, 2012 -
Re: It Takes Just A Moment
I like this poem. It has a good constant flow for the reader to read. It has good description and keeps the reader going.
May 7, 2012 -
Re: Violet Saga: Year One Prologue Final Draft
Very nice! Can't wait to read more. I think this is very well written and it had me at that "can't put the book down" stage. Can't wait to see ...
May 7, 2012