kathy45662

Hello! I'm in a poetry reviewing mood today! I loved this poem! I love warm climates and nice breezes. I don't really have anything else to add to those who ...

Try some different words. The rhyming does seem forced and you focused more on making words rhyme than making a poem. It's a nice poem, don't get me wrong, needs ...

I really liked this story and wish it were longer. When I have letters or notes in my stories I indent them. I think that's what is supposed to be ...

Some errors I saw: I stare out my window, the dark sky the dirty old houses Either I stare out my window at the dark sky and the dirty houses ...

Wow! Great writing! I'm inspired! It's a great piece and I hope to read more funny writings as well! Everyone else has pretty much said how to improve it so ...

I love how you described the spiders. I hate them, I have arachnaphobia, even though when I was a kid I played with the Grandaddy Long legs. I pulled a ...

This is AWESOME! Great way for some students to remember the elements if they need to. Students in high school or college. Too bad they can't all rhyme but still ...

As theotherone and bugbug have already corrected and commented, I have to agree. There was some grammar. Once the bad grammar kept popping up to me, I had to stop ...

I absolutely love this! It's very nice written and I love the descriptions of when you were still in the womb with each of your twins. Very nice! I don't ...

Very good writing. Short, sweet, and to the point. Your writing is ncie and doesn't blabber about nonesense that has nothing to do with this topic. I can relate to ...

IT has potential. Like the other reviewer said, watch what you write. Although this is fan fiction so it doesn't really matter too much. Keep the story original too. What's ...

Hey, this was a little confusing at first but then I realized they were reading minds. Then I understood after the first few lines. I understand what they're talking about ...

I'm trying to find things to critique but it's very well written. You've done an excellent job. One thing I found: “What are you looking at, Mags?” my father said ...

I have not read others' reviews so they may have already covered what I'm about to suggest. Double check your spelling and grammar. When you use quotations as a character ...

I really like this writing. One I view the movie as I read this so it's easy to visualize. You are using all your senses and I can see a ...