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Sorry for the loss :( Keep strong! You wrote a very good poem, keep it up! I liked the questions and as others have said, that could be hard questions ...

I will review your poem today! I think most if not all of the constructive criticizm has been pointed out and the grammar too. I love this and hope to ...

Poems can be well written but with too big words. If the average reader can't understand the words they won't like the poem because they aren't going to stop and ...

Well I must say this is a very good piece. I could feel the emotion and work you put into it. All the constructive criticizm has already been pointed out ...

WOW! I think I tried one time when I had writer's block to write a story about a girl with writer's it didn't go passed the first line. It was ...

If you ever post anything in the wrong area, moderators will relocate it for you if they notice. I've done it by accident, like posting a novel in a short ...

I will do a better review when you post in paragraphs. I know it takes a few extra minutes, but if you put forth the effort, others will too in ...

Being a teacher's aide, I could argue some points but I'm not here to critique how you feel about the poem. I'm here to critique the poem not opinion. I ...

I kept reading and wondered fi you were going to say something important...just telling me to listen but I listened and didn't get anything from ti. THe first 3 stanzas ...

This is very interesting. I hope the letter gets sent. Are you going to write more? I love the depth you have . I like being able to visualize the ...

I'm not that great at poetry either but once in a while one "POPS" into my head. This was a very well written and itneresting poem. I like poem that ...

“Look April, honey, you’ll feel a lot better if you talk about it.” I don't know who's talking to April until the next line, and I'm assuming. There could be ...

Hey, good story. I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes. their (bald) maths teacher. Take out the s on maths teacher. It's only one teacher. :) Mr Grady inquired Mr. ...

I'd give it an 8. Why? Because no song or poem, or anything, is a perfect 10! I don't see any errors as far as grammar and I love the ...