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  • Stealing Grace

    THIS IS THE LATEST REVISION FOR PART 1. PLEASE USE THIS WHEN REVIEWING! THANKS!SECTION 1:Part 1:Stealing GraceIt was the first day of his Senior Year. Jared Moore rushed to park ...

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  • Stealing Grace (Part 1 of 3)

    THIS IS THE LATEST REVISION FOR PART 1. PLEASE USE THIS WHEN REVIEWING! THANKS! I HAVE REDITED THIS FIRST PART WITH OTHERS' COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS. I TRIED TO ITALICIZE AND ...

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  • Stealing Grace (Part 2 of 3)

    PART 2: I AM EDITING TODAY 4-1-11 AND TRYING TO MAKE SURE I SEPERATE PARAGRAPHS AND ITALICIZE AND INDENT NOTES. I HAVE IN THE DOCUMENT BUT WHEN I POST IT ...

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  • Stealing Grace (Part 3 of 3)

    PART 3: AS I DID WITH PART 1 AND PART 2, I AM EDITING TODAY TO WHAT I HAVE IT IN MY WORD DOCUMENT. WHEN I POST IT DOESN'T KEEP ...

    41 min read
  • Grace

    This is written from one characters' point of view based on the novella I wrote Stealing Grace.Grace by JaredShe is so beautiful,I can’t stand to stray.I can’t leave her alone,I ...

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  • Amanda (or Gordon) Title not set in stone yet.

    Amanda/GrodonLittle did Amanda know where the road would lead? She stopped at a fork in the road. It was a dirt road, some gravel, and surrounded by corn fields. The ...

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  • "Dear Cloud" Poem

    I wrote this poem from the perspective of Tifa. It's supposed to take place after Final Fantasy 7 and the movie that took place 2 years after the events in ...

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  • Alexandra chapter 1

    I was trying to delete the thread,but no delete button have I read!

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  • Alexandra Chapter 2

    OPENING or: ch 2Joshua came up to the large hole that I had for a window in my room. “Alex, wake up!” Joshua was whispering with his hands leaning on ...

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  • Alexandra Chapter 3

    Chapter 3:The Beach & MelanieJoe and I reached the edge of the beach. “Will you die if you totally dehydrate or don’t have water? What if you are dry?”“I don’t ...

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  • All About Babies (Poem)

    Please review! I haven't finished! I know most of you don't have babies, but if you have a little brother or sister, maybe you can help me add some more. ...

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  • My Soldier In Gray

    My Soldier In GrayYou packed away,I told you to stay.You are so brave,My soldier in gray.I told you no,And you said yes.I said don’t go,But for you it was best.You ...

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  • Alexandra Chapter 1 (Revised!)

    Please delete this thread,for another is needed to be read.

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  • Alexandra Chapter 1 Final Version...maybe?

    Beginning of my re-write. This is part of Chapter 1. I want to know how it ocmpares to the other versions and what everyone else thinks of this. Does it ...

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  • Alexandra Chapter 2 Final

    2“Never mind Alex. I meant…well you’re like a sister to me.” Joshua hesitated.“Well then let’s head to the gates. Let’s get this day over. Maybe the sooner we leave the ...

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  • Fights and Kisses

    Fights and kissesOh how I wish I could say,How I feel about you today.I have known this a little while,I think maybe we’re both in denial.We don’t seem to get ...

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And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley