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Re: Instant love
I can't tell if the lack of punctuation is intentional or not. On the one hand, it could signify the jumble of thoughts and feelings that come with facing your ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Shanndrae Woods 4
Seeing that this story was written in the present tense, I was intrigued right away. Considering most of the work that I have read on this site has been in ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Sniper: Prologue (2/3)
I thought that there was some good dialogue that occurred in the text. I wasn't sure where the story was going to go when I first started reading the piece, ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Finding Home
I was a bit disappointed by the usual characteristics of vampires. I wanted something unique about them for this story. That being said, you did advertise about it being the ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: The End
I honestly haven't read a lot of flash fiction, but this story has made me want to give it a try! Like the other reviewer, I thought the opening with ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: Ravens Rook(pt1)
There was a lot of detail in this and I have to say that I absolutely loved it. You have a way with words, my friend. I also liked how ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: Conduit [Chapter 1][1st draft]
I could relate to this character, which is a great trait to have when it comes to writing and stories in general. I wasn't sure how I felt in the ...
Sep 28, 2017
