justadreamer

Thank you for writing this piece. The girl in your story reminds me of...well...me. And it really helps. Even if it is all fiction. The last part with the little ...

What’s the matter, pitter patter, let’s drive her madder… That was my favorite line. Nice job...I really liked it!

I liked this story because you could feel her desire even if she showed her passion in a strange way. Good story!

That was beautiful. But what is more rewarding, then traveling from who you are to who you can become? That was definitely my favorite stanza. It showed the real meaning ...

Wow! Very vivid: I could actually see her eyes. I thought this was very very good.

Such a sad story that happens to children everywhere. I had a little bit of trouble on who was speaking without quotes, but I thought it was really good. And ...

I loved this poem. Especially that it had an underlying message with it. I love it!

That was great! I am in no way against homosexuals but that poem was hilarious. Especially the last line. I loved it.

I really enjoyed reading that. It was like I could picture myself in the same place. You wrote the story well, as if it actually happened to you. I really ...

I really liked it. Especially how you compared to toys. The details were good, yet very subtle. Just wondering: When you wrote this, what were you comparing? Who is you? ...