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  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Tree Girl Chapter 6

    I know that this chapter is kind of short. Sorry. Chapter 7 will be out soon!

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Science is Quite Poetic

    good way I just don't know how to review this!

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: 2020 Isn't A One Off Year

    yep! anytime.

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Science is Quite Poetic

    I don't really know how to review this lol.

    Dec 9, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Ash

    Hi! Welcome to YWS! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, this poem painted perfect imagery in my head! And I agree with Horisun, your punctuation was a ...

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 5

    Thanks.

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: camping

    I think that review was longer that the poem.

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Tide Goes Out (Chapter Six)

    NOW. Please. I am dying!!!!!!!!!!

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Tide Goes Out (Chapter Six)

    TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 5

    I want to know how you view my writing so I can improve it. If it is that bad, then say it in a nice way.

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Tree Girl Chapter 4

    She is in fifth grade. Thanks for the review!

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Tree Girl Chapter 2

    Thanks! I just published chapters 4 and 5. Thank you for pointing that out.

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Tree Girl

    Oh. Whoops. Thanks for pointing that out! I will fix that soon

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Ocean’s Herald

    Hi! Little late, but welcome to YWS! Hannah here for a quick review. I liked the stories descriptiveness, and its creativity but I have a few suggestions 1) It didn't ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 5; The Bonfire

    That was an incredibly long review.

    Dec 7, 2020


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