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Re: ...
Christianity does not own the idea of marriage. I s'pose Christians have some claim over the term but the concept of two people pairing is older than the idea of ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Illuminated
This is a diary entry or something scrawled on the walls of a cult-house in a bad horror flick. It's 'poetry' in the broadest sense. Hell, it's anything but not ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: No Such Thing And Never Was
Thanks CC, insightful as always. I know the feeling, I remember the general loathing I felt about the narrator of The Fault in Our Stars, I can't stand characters that ...
Apr 18, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (1/3)
In an attempt to keep equal weighting in the parts that make up this story, I have extended it to three parts.
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: (nothing)
write*
Jun 27, 2012 -
Re: Skin and Bones
Thanks lily moore. One note: "moved" isn't weak in this context because it quickly establishes her and [/i] her body[/i] as two unique and separate entities. By having her watch ...
Jun 20, 2012 -
Re: Skin and Bones
Thanks a lot, very thorough. And please don't apologise, you weren't harsh at all. I will just make a couple of clarifications. -'She stood with the boneless grace of a ...
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: That's So Gay!
*sigh*
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Cuts.
Whenever prose features I am inclined to read it, and for the most part I wonder why it is featured at all. This vignette, if I can call it that, ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Lerra
Hell, Kitty, Sarg, Confetti, SmylinG, Kafka -- All my favourite reviewers got to this, thank you all. And god, you all brought something, light from a different angles and so ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Lerra
Thanks DG. I will briefly cover two points. 1) I want the reader to know he is going to die, I want it to be clear he does something terrible ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Behind The Mirror
A review is coming.
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Alex
Thanks SmylinG. I don't want my rant to overshadow my work so I have placed it in a spoiler. It was an exercise, inconsequential, sure. But it did help me ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: I
Good God. How have I missed you.
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Flashbacks
A review is coming.
Oct 21, 2011
