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joshuapaul

  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Christianity does not own the idea of marriage. I s'pose Christians have some claim over the term but the concept of two people pairing is older than the idea of ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Illuminated

    This is a diary entry or something scrawled on the walls of a cult-house in a bad horror flick. It's 'poetry' in the broadest sense. Hell, it's anything but not ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: No Such Thing And Never Was

    Thanks CC, insightful as always. I know the feeling, I remember the general loathing I felt about the narrator of The Fault in Our Stars, I can't stand characters that ...

    Apr 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (1/3)

    In an attempt to keep equal weighting in the parts that make up this story, I have extended it to three parts.

    Feb 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: (nothing)

    write*

    Jun 27, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Skin and Bones

    Thanks lily moore. One note: "moved" isn't weak in this context because it quickly establishes her and [/i] her body[/i] as two unique and separate entities. By having her watch ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Skin and Bones

    Thanks a lot, very thorough. And please don't apologise, you weren't harsh at all. I will just make a couple of clarifications. -'She stood with the boneless grace of a ...

    Jun 19, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    *sigh*

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cuts.

    Whenever prose features I am inclined to read it, and for the most part I wonder why it is featured at all. This vignette, if I can call it that, ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lerra

    Hell, Kitty, Sarg, Confetti, SmylinG, Kafka -- All my favourite reviewers got to this, thank you all. And god, you all brought something, light from a different angles and so ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lerra

    Thanks DG. I will briefly cover two points. 1) I want the reader to know he is going to die, I want it to be clear he does something terrible ...

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Behind The Mirror

    A review is coming.

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Alex

    Thanks SmylinG. I don't want my rant to overshadow my work so I have placed it in a spoiler. It was an exercise, inconsequential, sure. But it did help me ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I

    Good God. How have I missed you.

    Oct 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Flashbacks

    A review is coming.

    Oct 21, 2011


We are discreet sheep; we wait to see how the drove is going, and then go with the drove.
— Mark Twain