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joshuapaul

  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Christianity does not own the idea of marriage. I s'pose Christians have some claim over the term but the concept of two people pairing is older than the idea of ...

    Apr 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Illuminated

    This is a diary entry or something scrawled on the walls of a cult-house in a bad horror flick. It's 'poetry' in the broadest sense. Hell, it's anything but not ...

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: No Such Thing And Never Was

    Thanks CC, insightful as always. I know the feeling, I remember the general loathing I felt about the narrator of The Fault in Our Stars, I can't stand characters that ...

    Apr 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (1/3)

    In an attempt to keep equal weighting in the parts that make up this story, I have extended it to three parts.

    Feb 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: (nothing)

    write*

    Jun 27, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Skin and Bones

    Thanks lily moore. One note: "moved" isn't weak in this context because it quickly establishes her and [/i] her body[/i] as two unique and separate entities. By having her watch ...

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Skin and Bones

    Thanks a lot, very thorough. And please don't apologise, you weren't harsh at all. I will just make a couple of clarifications. -'She stood with the boneless grace of a ...

    Jun 19, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    *sigh*

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cuts.

    Whenever prose features I am inclined to read it, and for the most part I wonder why it is featured at all. This vignette, if I can call it that, ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lerra

    Hell, Kitty, Sarg, Confetti, SmylinG, Kafka -- All my favourite reviewers got to this, thank you all. And god, you all brought something, light from a different angles and so ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lerra

    Thanks DG. I will briefly cover two points. 1) I want the reader to know he is going to die, I want it to be clear he does something terrible ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Behind The Mirror

    A review is coming.

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Alex

    Thanks SmylinG. I don't want my rant to overshadow my work so I have placed it in a spoiler. It was an exercise, inconsequential, sure. But it did help me ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I

    Good God. How have I missed you.

    Oct 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Flashbacks

    A review is coming.

    Oct 21, 2011


You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...
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