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AH ok that makes way, way more sense now. My B.

Thanks for the review. Yea the format needs some work. It's hard to get it right on here due to format restrictions, so the word doc will have more detail. ...

Thanks for the review! Yea I get the Chrys thing. Her full name is Chrysanthemum so I thought it would be cool to shorten it for a cop. Thanks for ...

All good.

whats ya beef with big brother?

Will do!

Thanks for the review! I know the scene is a little short. It's actually the first part of a single scene but I didn't want to put the whole thing ...

Will do!

Thanks! I'll work on it! Though TBH rhyming is about all I'm good at. So we will see.

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! However, I cannot for the life of me figure out how to format this thing. Help!

Hey! Thanks for the review! My friend is still alive, but we can never talk again because of private reasons. But it still sucks and I think about on the ...

Thanks! I would share the details, but they are pretty personal. Let's just say that something is stopping us from talking to each other and neither of us wanted it ...

Your writing ego should be strong! Trust me, I don't like when reviewers link to articles. It's demeaning and condescending (in my opinion), and just changes the whole tone of ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! I agree the opening blurb is confusing. I'm working on the phrasing right now, but hopefully, it will be better down the line. You are ...