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*wipes tears* Aw! So sweet. It was very, very good from the first line to the last. I wish it had been longer..... but short and sweet is fine too. ...

LOTS OF WORK TO BE DONE!! Although the people above my post have pretty much said it all i would like to let you know that even though we are ...

Very interesting.... I love it. Although, the ending was a little too abrupt for my liking I feel like it was sorta just like a 'plonk' into a wall, if ...

That was short.... and alittle scary! :? Although, it was very straight to the point I wished it was alittle longer. Tell us what the 'web' is all about. I ...

Hello ambercoultis! This piece was very intriguing, it made me want to read more because it was so subtle but you lacked on descriptionof your charcters. I felt like it ...

*GASP!* My, my, how could you do this..... *shakes head* so sad. Edward Cullen is my absolute dream guy and you made him a complete jerk! Although, this is very ...

Well Jabber had pretty much said it all. :shock: I have to say, it went by alittle too quickly for my liking. Most of all I think that the ending ...

Interesting peice. Never read one like this. I like it but it was a bit confusing at points. He didn’t love her, h ad never loved her, would never love ...

Very good start but you NEED to check your spelling and re-read atleast twice. Here is the mistakes you made that I corrected. :] Other wise very good. :]

This could have alittle more spice in it but other wise very good this doesn't make sence though: Sometimes like you hate me, or at least that's how it seems. ...