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Hey :) So I won't do any nitpicks as it seems the other guys got you covered there :) but I love this, I really do and I think if ...

I think I would have liked this a lot more if it was more like a story, at the moment it's just like a script, you don't have any descriptions ...

I don't think this is rough at all! It's done the trick of making me want to read more so well done. I think Already Gone sounds a lot better ...

This is great. The fact that Peter actually broke up & upset Violet shows he's human and you've showed he's not perfect which is fantastic. I think it's good that ...

Only now i started reading your stories and i've got to say they're all amazing. I love the way their the oppositwe to each other - very fairytale. I loved ...

Heyy :) Thought I'd just leave my opinion. All in all I thought this story was interesting, I'm looking forward to reading what happens at the park so good work ...

This was really great. I think you should carry on with this story, you've got me hooked already :). Well done. Not much of a review I know and I ...

Well since a lot of people have reviewd I'm not going to repeat what they've already said =). But I really enjoyed it you should definitely write more. I loved ...

I think this is a really good poem about a true friendship but maybe you should state the differences between a friend and a true friend just to make it ...

Hmm I don't really know what to say because this was really good!But Ive got to do two reviews so here it goes lol. You described alcohol perfectly where it ...