jessie2009

You did a fanstatic job on this! I liked how you can just feel all the emotion in the poem. It has a lot of feeling in it, which I ...

I really liked this piece. Hopefully you'll post the rest soon=]. I think every one else got all the mistakes. Well, Keep writing --Jess.

That's fine. It's a good piece. Well, yeah no problem.

No problem! One chapter out of a book always has to be boring and slow... Even in the best books. I think I will like the next chapter! I was ...

Yeah. I agree with every one up there. I'm thirteen and I could never see my self doing that. But this was AMAZING! Well, gotta go! You write really good. ...

Wow. That was really good. And I hope you write more. I would do a longer review, but I am off to school. Uh! But bye. Hope you write more.. ...

That was nice. Every one else got all the grammars problems.

I feel like Connor doesn't want to admit he's gay. But I guess that's just how I feel towards it. I loved how you made Justin as a character. He ...

I love it. I think you will definitely get this publish. Well, good luck! --Jessie.

Ah! I really liked it.. Can you please, please post another chapter? It's so good!! If you do I will read it. I want to find out why he has ...

Ah! I really liked it.. Can you please, please post another chapter? It's so good!! If you do I will read it. I want to find out why he has ...

I like the whole idea how the bear talks to her. I really like. Since the person above me got every thing wrong.. You're pretty much good. I think you ...

I like the beginning of this. I think you should continue writing. I did not see any mistakes... Jessie.

Aha. I loved that

I like it. But I think your dream paragraphs be shorter. Thats the only thing that I think you should do! If you write more I will deff. read more=].. ...