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Re: Rainbow
Oh Abbi! I loved it! I've probably told you this before. I really hope you write more.. Can you please? It will stink if you don't write more. Well I ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"
I like it. You forgot to capitalize a lot of I's. But I like this story. I hope your write more. I would love to keep reading. Other than the ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Audacity
Hi. I like it. You should definitely write more. You have a lot of punctuation errors But nothing to major. I like it! I think Shawn likes Natile? Not sure ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Who Are We Really?
Wow. It's really good. Are you writing more? I hope you are=]. I like it for some odd reason. Like it just has like I can't explain it. But I ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Young Romance
Wow. I really liked it! Are you writing more? I would really like to read more. I didn't see any mistakes, But HEY! I suckk at that. your a good ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: The Echo (Chapter Five)
I love it!! Your are such a good writer, I've read a couple of your stories before and they are really good=]. ANother thing your story just flows perfectly together. ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Detention
Hah. That was adorable. My favorite person is Addie, she reminds me of my little cousin Hailee, who is always trying to scare my littler cousin. Hah, I think I've ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: The Unknown chapter 3
I disagree with taylachase. I love it. Why wouldn't people want to read long pieces. why would you not write something that is super good? Well your a great writer ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: DELETED D
Wow! That was good. I liked the Matt character a lot. He was like perfect in till you catch him kissing another girl. Don't all guys do that, lead you ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: a rap, based on society
I read it to my brother, who absoutley loves rap, and he says it good=]. It was so right! people don't need a million dollars. which youre trying to tell ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Seven Souls (Temp. Title)
I think there should be some guy in the foster home thing bigig. And they like fight but finally when her father gets out of jail and she goes to ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 8
Oh, I love it! I can't believe David. Oh, poor Amanda!! I feel so bad for her. All she ever wanted is for David to love her and now he's ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: 12 Roses
I think you should write more. I like the title. But I have one question, how am i able to awnser the poll, i dont know if theres even a ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (8)
I am so happy she finally told someone!! Now she might be able to be a tad happier=].. i just want to find out whats she's having. But she's only ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (7)
Yeah, you're right she does have a bit of snobiness in her. But I love it=]. And watch her roommate turn out gorgeous. and they turn out best friends, have ...
Aug 5, 2009
