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jessie2009

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rainbow

    Oh Abbi! I loved it! I've probably told you this before. I really hope you write more.. Can you please? It will stink if you don't write more. Well I ...

    Aug 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"

    I like it. You forgot to capitalize a lot of I's. But I like this story. I hope your write more. I would love to keep reading. Other than the ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Audacity

    Hi. I like it. You should definitely write more. You have a lot of punctuation errors But nothing to major. I like it! I think Shawn likes Natile? Not sure ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Who Are We Really?

    Wow. It's really good. Are you writing more? I hope you are=]. I like it for some odd reason. Like it just has like I can't explain it. But I ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Young Romance

    Wow. I really liked it! Are you writing more? I would really like to read more. I didn't see any mistakes, But HEY! I suckk at that. your a good ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Echo (Chapter Five)

    I love it!! Your are such a good writer, I've read a couple of your stories before and they are really good=]. ANother thing your story just flows perfectly together. ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: Detention

    Hah. That was adorable. My favorite person is Addie, she reminds me of my little cousin Hailee, who is always trying to scare my littler cousin. Hah, I think I've ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Unknown chapter 3

    I disagree with taylachase. I love it. Why wouldn't people want to read long pieces. why would you not write something that is super good? Well your a great writer ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: DELETED D

    Wow! That was good. I liked the Matt character a lot. He was like perfect in till you catch him kissing another girl. Don't all guys do that, lead you ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: a rap, based on society

    I read it to my brother, who absoutley loves rap, and he says it good=]. It was so right! people don't need a million dollars. which youre trying to tell ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Seven Souls (Temp. Title)

    I think there should be some guy in the foster home thing bigig. And they like fight but finally when her father gets out of jail and she goes to ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 8

    Oh, I love it! I can't believe David. Oh, poor Amanda!! I feel so bad for her. All she ever wanted is for David to love her and now he's ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 12 Roses

    I think you should write more. I like the title. But I have one question, how am i able to awnser the poll, i dont know if theres even a ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: All Babies Are Blessings (8)

    I am so happy she finally told someone!! Now she might be able to be a tad happier=].. i just want to find out whats she's having. But she's only ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: All Babies Are Blessings (7)

    Yeah, you're right she does have a bit of snobiness in her. But I love it=]. And watch her roommate turn out gorgeous. and they turn out best friends, have ...

    Aug 5, 2009


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein