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Oh and also, you are supposed to write it lines. Its grammatically correct. New paragraph every speaker. It is also double spaced.

I admit, yes childish, haha. It was an assignment, we had to write a childrens story with quotations. As for the flashy words, we had to. We were not allowed ...

This is part of "The Llama Song" minus the last line :S

I really like this poem, it is written about a writer. A great point of view! I only suggest you try to put it into lines instead of the paragraph, ...

Haileyanniful, it doesn't rhyme, where are you talking about?

I was sort of thinking about that, putting what the scar was and what did to "make me stronger", no way to describe it was coming to me. Maybe looking ...

This story amazes me! I read it over twice. Can you like PM me and tell me when or if you write more of this?

This poem is very well written, I loved the stanza and how it rhymed. It is all tied together and there are no stray though. Absolutely positively beautiful.

It flows nicely and has a great emotional lace. I like it.