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Re: She Knows Him
that was interesting ... and not in a bad way. I like it the the pace that your writing goes. the way you wrote it was interesting too it was ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: You just don't listen
Thank you !!!
May 19, 2011 -
Re: An Unsent Letter
This does not really sound like a story to me you didn't use adjective or figurative language. If you want to submit this as a story add emotion so the ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Need You Now
This story I can relate to because I always wonder who I am going to fall in love with so Iike It because of that and because your emotions were ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
That was really good short simple and sweet. Lots of details Which is great. So yeah I really liked it !!
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Don't Greet Me
Love love love love love love this it is super sweet and cute and educational wow amazing you wrapped all that into one short story. I have already read some ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: What love does to some people
Thank you I will use this to help with my next copy :) !!!
May 17, 2011 -
Re: What love does to some people
This is not a true story !!! I repeat not a true story!!! :) if to was a true story she probably walked in or was bringing towels to my ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: What love does to some people
You were right about writing the story to get it out of my mind because sometimes I forget Ideas I have and there not as good as the second time
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Day
Oh my goodness that was really cute and sweet not to mention an awesome job with grammar and that stuff. The weird thing was It sounded like it came out ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Torture Chamber
That was really good you did really good with the imagery in the story and it would be really easy to turn that into a longer story rather thAn just ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: And that would be a lie...
wow! you did a really good job projecting her thoughts and feelings. and it was commical to I really enjoyed it dont really see thyat action part of it yet ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Just a Dream.
good cop says: very good and descriptive I like it would be good to music bad cop says : it seemed more like a poem than a song and I ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
that was funny an cute :)
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
that was cute and funny aside from the speling and little grammer it sounds like something I woould write if I got bored :)
Dec 13, 2010