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jayflames1

jayflames1

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Curiosity Killed The Cat

    A bad, but entirely joking insult. Don't worry about it. Good story though.

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Review Re: Human

    cool

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    hah

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    ok

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Placebo

    Nice and simple. Easily relatable. Nice formatting for this kind of poem. I don't get why you didn't use commas. It would be easy to get misconstrued about that. (haha) ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Walking Survival - Prologue

    I'm gonna review this! Later! Not now though.... I'll be back!

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Review Re: Human

    so empathy?

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Curiosity Killed The Cat

    You're not an Aesop's fable!

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: 25 Things to Remember When You Become a Book Character

    18. If you don't know which wire to cut, just cut all of them LOL

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water Lily in the Wind

    wow, your good at reviews. The review is longer than the piece ... Teach me your ways.

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    So are you saying poems can't be reviewed? Poets have free reign in the writing world?

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The City - Part 1

    I'M NOT CRAZY !

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    Is there a way that I can save this somewhere on YWS so I can see it everyday?

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The City - Part 1

    It was because of the description you had. It mentioned wildfires.

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    hilarious

    Apr 13, 2015


You have light and peace inside you. If you let it out, you can change the world around you.
— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender