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Hello, I'm Jasmine. The girl looked up. “No,” There doesn't need to be a comma after 'No' just a period. ~~~~~~~~~~ kizame wiped the dust off her finger You forgot ...

Helllooooo Okay so practice....owie!!!! haha My feet are killing me!! ahahaa...anyy whooo I read this before practice and i was like awhghdghghdk she stopped writing grrrr haha okay but i ...

Sarah Sarah Sarah!!!! I'm not going to do a line by line review...I'm just not in the mood. Haha. However!!! This was really good and I was super excited about ...

Helllllllooooooo!!!! Okay, so I'm not going to do a line by line analysis here because Sarah already did that for me. Haha, GO SARAH!!! Any who...I think she talks to ...

Hello. I know you posted this a few days ago, but I'd like to just do a quick one over for you. I saw that someone had already pointed out ...

Hey Kristen!!! I'm so excited!!! You posted it up, yay! Well, I thought i'd check it out again, sometimes i even miss stuff the first time. Okay here I go. ...

WHAAAAA?????? NO REVIEW FROM JASMINE??????? God I am getting SO behind. I am so sorry. I got the message and was all 'okay in two seconds' then idk something must ...

Well well well. It seems Ms Ella J. Has one of them dark sides. I'm not going to lie to you, this piece is really...disturbing? But good? Do you know ...

Okay, here as promised, and i see Merry was here first...shes cool. If i point out the same thigns she does...sorry. I didn't read it. night me and dad ate ...

Hello. I am Here as promised. This is a very interesting piece. I didn't really find anything wrong with it except: “Please Adrian just listen to me.” She pleaded, edging ...

Okay, wow I realize that this was posted months ago but I can never refuse to read a short love story. I had just written a piece simular to this, ...

You mentioned this story before so I thought I'd swing by and take a look. :arrow: Fav quote because it's sooo well descripted....AWESOME!! She stood on cold stone. Her gaze ...

OoOOoOOoh yay! Thirteen...Seriously if people keep posting good stuff, I'll never get to my own haha. Any ways Here I go!!!!!!!!! Haha, I'm glad you llike my squiggles, but I ...

“We’ve got a room assigned now,” she grinned at me. “No more roaming around the school looking for empty classrooms. It’s more private and the windows are blacked out. It’s ...

Here as promised!!! This was short and sweet. Amal is so...idk warm and friendly? good job with her character.. Where did that rocker chick go? I thought they would be ...