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Hello Lucyy, I'm Jazz! =) We both knew that our fates had been meddled with too much and we just could never be together. This sentence was the only one ...

Hello VampX13. I'm Jazz! Her want was raw: she could taste it, like the tang of a fruit, in her mouth. The first time i read this, i was going ...

Just to let everyone know, I have written chapters preface through five with Veronica and William as the two main characters so those for sure will be like that. But ...

*The moment I opened this Fall for you by secondhand senerade (or how ever you spell it) came on and i was like ... wow goes perfect-ish. Dont-cha think?* I ...

Awesome length!!! "I need to go back for my stuff, at least the stuff that is important.” You keep saying stuff. it's okay to go into detail here. Say something ...

Prologues a little small but you should have posted them separately. ~~~~~~~~ “He doesn’t like me.” I whispered to my best friend. Comma instead of period. ~~~~~~~~ “No! He doesn’t, ...

Hello I'm Jasmine, you can call me Jas or Jazz. Whatever, it doesnt matter to me. “Jaden” a voice called “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” it was a man calling ...

YAY NEW CHAPTER!!! ~~~~~~~ I was curled up on Mike’s chest, listening to the steady beat of his heart and the slight rise and fall of his chest. His arm ...

YAYAYAYAYAY here we go....! “We don’t know till I complete the Change.” I said. First of.. w00t w00t chapter two!!! haha Second, quickly remind the reader of whats going on ...

agitation. I just wanted to point out that i love your vocabulary. Kudos to you my friend. ~~~~~~~ I immediately tensed when I smelt that familiar tangy scent that was ...

I needed help, I needed answers, and Moe was the only one that I could think of who would help. You kinda switched things around here. First she was all ...

William *Melts* love that name!!! ~~~~~~~ I have no idea what to expect from these creatures around me. I realized this is only the prefrace but maybe you could elaborate ...

“I’m not doing anything you say.” I really don't think this is the best time to be stubbern, Ruby. haha ~~~~~~~~~~ How very Titanic. Question mark here. Love that movie...very ...

Author's Note : This chapter is going to really, really, REALLY confuse you. That's the whole point. Don't worry, you will get an explanation eventually. Just go with it :D ...

Quick Question before I begin. How come you never put a period after a title like Mr. or Mrs.? Okay, On I go!!! most people seemed on the verge of ...