janey

Alright, so I rewrote this song... there's music to it now although I think I might have to rewrite the music because I don't like the flow. Anyway, I think ...

October Girl - thanks for the review! Some of the lines are the way they are because of how the music this song was originally written for flowed... I had ...

I guess I should explain the concept first. It's about addiction... something that's within you and that controls you - shortening your lifespan and stealing your years without you even ...

Hey Kalliope, Thanks for the review! I admit that the lyrics don't really have a direction - my lyrics aren't typically like this. I think I kind of started with ...

Thanks for the comments - I'm glad that you like the songs! Yeah - the vocals on Anymore were done after I did the ones for Without You, so they're ...

Thanks for the comments - I really appreciate them. I know I'm not a vocalist :oops: I just record at home for fun - and to capture what I want ...

I think that the lyrics would make a good song... I'm not so sure about the number of the times you repeat "We're just like you" but otherwise... I don't ...