janarose

The title of this caught my eye, then I had to go and read the introduction before I read this first chapter. I really like the story line you have ...

I’m still new at this whole reviewing business so if this gets unorganized or seems nit-picky then just bear with me, please. I’m going to start off with some technical ...

Since you said this is just your first draft, I'll start by saying I really like the beginning so far! You've gotten just enough here to get me interested. I'll ...

Ok, so I’m not all that great at reviews just yet, but I’m working on it. I’m not going to give a sentence by sentence break down or anything like ...

I honestly really enjoyed reading this! I didn’t really notice anything major (I’m not really a professional reviewer or anything) but I’ll share the things I did notice. Tomorrow is ...

Ok, so I’m not really the best at reviewing because it’s been a long while since I have done any, so bear with me if I get to rambling or ...

This was a nice read! I really enjoyed the idea for the story and the dramatic points it had. There were a few little things, style wise, that bugged me ...

This was really well-written. I didn't notice any grammatical errors when I was reading, which is always nice. I also just enjoyed the idea in general, it's something that definitely ...

I can relate to this so much! I actually had a best friend, whom I was really close with, pass away a few years ago and I actually would write ...

Ok, I really like the idea you're going for here but there are a lot of tweaks I see that would make your writing a lot better and a lot ...

I'm not the best at reviewing others' work, but I'm going to give it a go on this piece because I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Aside from grammatical issues, which ...

I really enjoyed the simplicity and straightforwardness of this piece. It's definitely easy to relate to, for me anyhow. There are some small grammar issues but in a piece like ...