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Re: Monster
Great poem! It describes everything about fictional and real monsters. In real life, it seems like the monsters, are us. Its because sometimes were hostile and mean to other people ...
Jul 28, 2015 -
Re: by grains
Excellent Poem! It actually reminds me of erosion. Its like everything is falling down in a dramatic way. But I can see why everything fell. All the weight was being ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Anxiety
Wow! That was great poem! That is what anxiety feels like for me! I like how you compared a near death situation to anxienty feelings. It feels like your in ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: The Land of Milk and Honey
I have no idea why you wrote you weren't much of a poet! That was awesome! Making poems is completly in your blood! It could just imagine being in The ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse
Nice tips! If there is a zombie attack in my neighborhood, I will use your tips to survive the apocalypse. :) As the article, it was really fun to read. ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: The Real Story of Little Red Riding Hood~FTT- MusicalTheaterGirl17 vs EternalRain
I loved your story MusicalTheaterGirl17! I don't wan't to be to sappy, but I think your gonna win the contest with this story! I like how lots of times, fairy ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: How to train your rider
Really nice story! It kind of reminded me of How To Train Your Dragon. I liked all the dragons and the charecters in their. This is very funny. I like ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Parallel Needs: Chapter One: Part One
Amazing story! I have a connection with was Maddie's brother, Michael. Why I say that is because every day, my sister is busy reading one of her long chapter books ...
Jun 14, 2015 -
Re: In Boo Radley's Skin
Nice job writing this! I'm jamesberry837 by the way. I liked your characters. You used great vocabulary too. One of my favorite words you used was enveleoped. But be sure ...
Jun 13, 2015
