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Re: "I Would Kill Myself"
This is a beautiful poem, with a really haunting end. People say, "I would just kill myself," way too often and don't realize what goes on in other peoples' lives ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Woods part 1.
So....I went back and edited this story (thanks to a little someone who recomended it.) Hope I did better this time Lol
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Newcastle Garden Fairy
This poem is charming smart and very cute. I like how you describe the little girl and her dress (it was as bright as the day was grey) I want ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: The Woods. part 1
Thanks for the review, I've got some editing to do!
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Life of a teenager
Your poem is a glimpse into the life of an average teenage girl; and believe it or not I feel like your poem kinda describes me !! Great work
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Apple
BRUH. Lololololololololol
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: She was Smiling
Wow. I'm SPEECHLESS. The way you see the world is incredible and so morbidly beautiful. Keep writing. You have an amazing talent.
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Study, Test, Dance, Kiss -Part 3 of 4
I liked it a lot. In fact, I laughed aloud a couple of times. BUT. Remember that selling mistakes, and grammar will kill you. Try to read over your work ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Changes
you have a lot of talent, this was an excellent work of fiction.
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Changes
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Dec 22, 2015
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Re: The Asylum of the Mind
You have a great talent, this was an excellent work of fiction.
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: to those who doubt their own beauty
Nice! I like the fact that you can really visualize everything you wrote. Great work!
Dec 22, 2015