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Re: A Dutiful Bride
Hey! Welcome to the site! I hope you love it here, its awesome! :smt003 So this was very good for a first post my friend! I only found 1 mistake: ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Running With Wolves Ch. 2 (so far)
Wow! This is fantastic! Great job! I really like this story, its very real and touching. (I started to well up :cry: ) I saw a couple of grammar things ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: but i love her anyways.
Awwwwwww this was so sweet! It reminds me of my neighbor who is 89 and not related to us in anyway but we love her like we love our grandmother. ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Denatured - Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi there! Wow, this is fantastic! I love it!! Didn't really notice any spelling mistakes or grammar. Awesome job my friend! Keep up the awesome work! -Irish :elephant: P.S Can't ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Firemen catch fire.
Hahaha I loved this! It has this feeling about it, I can't really describe it, but I really love it! It reminds me of this dream I had, it was ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: "Dream Self" episode 3, part 1
Hahahahaha LOVE IT! Is Ted really in love with Kim? Cuz' hes confusing me greatly :lol: Love the last line too! Keep up the good work! -Irish :elephant:
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: you're Not Perfect.
Hi there jessie2009! I wanna start off with I liked this! It had a very innocent ring to it. But I saw a couple things: It made me jut want ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Lovely
Well hello there Breathless! Welcome to YWS!! I hope you love it here like I do :smt003 Ok, so this story I thought was pretty good for a first post! ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Nalakaya; Heiress of Hell
Welcome to the site my friend!! So I'm not going to nitpick on you, but I do want to point something out: Whenever someone different speaks, it starts a new ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Threading Through a Needle (Reviews appreciated)
I 2nd the notion of never having heard of this! (I know that doesn't make sense but I feel like being random.) I do, however, LOVE this story! It was ...
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 2.
Wow, the more I read of this chapter (and chapter 1) the more into I got. I found myself leaning toward my computer monitor because of the suspence going on ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: "Dream Self" episode 2, part 2
Hello again! Still loving this, even more now that its getting more climactic! But my curiousity is eating at me, what happened with her boss? Loving Ted, loving the cat, ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: "Dream Self" episode 2, part 1
Hey, I am still loving these scripts! I didn't know you had posted another one though :lol: YAY THEY FOUND BUBBY! I was beginning to get worried about him... Keep ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Sisterly Love [3]
Hi there! Wow, I remember reading the first part of this when I just started out here and after a while I lost it. But I just found it again ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 1. Part 1.
OOOOOOOOO :shock: I loved this piece! Very well done! It was moving and real and lots of big words that I can't think of that are very good things :lol: ...
Sep 6, 2009