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Re: the mark......prolouge
Hi Jane Forest! Welcome to the site, I'm Irish and I'm gonna be your reviewer today! So, this seems like a pretty good start, even though its pretty short. I ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: Hush...
Hi Emmajane! Irish here! I'm glad to say that this was great! I loved it :D As usual your writing is stunning. Bravo my friend :smt003 I didn't find any ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: Military Fiction
Hiya! I'm Irish and welcome to the site! So, this was a pretty good piece! It was a little short for a prologue and it seemed to move kinda fast, ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: I Miss you
Hi! Irish here! Welcome to YWS! So, first of all: Awwww that was really sweet! Was it based off an experience? I thought this was a really great piece, I ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring
Hiya! The name's Irish and I'm here to review! *plays cheesy hero music* So, this was really touching to me! Part 1 was one of those times where you look ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: I Didn't Know
Wow, that was fantastic! Very sad and beautiful in its own way. I really liked it :D You have a very good hand at keeping the reader guessing. While I ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Iridescent Illusion ~ Kingdom Hearts
Oh my God! HI! I remember reading this! So here is what I say: I want to start off saying that again I am completely in love with how you ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: Short Story
Hiya! Irish here! So, I liked this! I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, and the story was rather heartwarming in a weird way....lol. Just one thing that sort've ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: My Truth
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Thats so sad! It reminds me of something that happened to me! Its so sweet! And sad at the same time oh my God! Awesome job! Keep up the ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: Thoughts
Hi! Welcome to the site! I'm Irish and I'm gonna review this today :D So this was interesting! It was clever to use your skills to describe the most confusing ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: Struck Sightless-chapter one
Wow! This is great! :D I loved it! Question: Is he blind? Keep up the awesome work! -Irish :elephant: *stars*
Oct 20, 2009 -
Re: grimoire book of the lesser key chp 1 the truth continue
Hi there! I'm Irish and I am here to review your lovely story today! :D So I think I shall get the worst part done first: WARNING NITPICKS ABOUT TO ...
Oct 18, 2009 -
Re: Memoirs of a Monster: A Fictional Tale of Nazi Germany
Hi! Wow. Great start here! I love all the flow in it, its great you had me hooked! I've been dieing to read the Diary of Anne Frank! But I ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Us
Hi there! So, I must say that I found the first part of this incredibly funny. How he was just so mezmorized by the fact that they couldn't find forks ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: After Words: Chpt 1 (Ania) part 1
Hi Nutty!! Just randomly found this, saw it was from you, and clicked! GO INTERNET! ok: I like this! Its very suspensful and I get the feeling that Sam is ...
Oct 15, 2009
