ireylcadence

Wow, I usually don't go for love poems, but this one was excellent. every season was an accomplice. The paths were invitations, that led to eminence. Very nice. Two things: ...

Haha, I thought the ellipsis was the poem at first, and I "liked" it for your very clever idea. And then I read retrodisco's comment and realized. Silly me. But, ...

I actually liked this quite much, which surprised me because I'm generally not too fond of "angsty" pieces, even if it is only faked angst. However, your imagery was very ...

This completely brightened up my day, no joke. Some light poetry, I love it! Just a few things. Your meter/rhythm was quite good at the beginning, but then it started ...

First of all, wow, what a coincidence, I've been writing a series of vignettes on a deluded hobo woman traveling with her dog named Averice. I'm rather fond of vagabonds ...

I knew it. You write beautifully. This seems so perfect for the holiday season especially. I was looking for a nitpick but I honestly could not find one. So this ...

Oohh, interesting title, attention-grabbing. And a poem that makes you think and has deeper, implicit meaning? Very nice. I had to read this a couple of times to make sense ...

Austria? You learned to ski in Austria??? So lucky. :) Beautiful, such an interesting story, I honestly couldn't stop. Especially the part about getting off the ski lift early; you ...

Very creative. It's not often we get to hear poetry from the viewpoint of a tiger :) I'm having some trouble with the syntax of your sentences here--while in terms ...

Wonderful poem, you've certainly got the lyricism down. :) Usually a poem of that length would scare me away, but this was so readable that I had to continue. Good ...

If you're not feeling depressed, then there is no need to pretend you are--poems don't need to be depressing to be emotional! Write about what you're truly thinking and feeling, ...

Let's fix some grammar points: He who has been eaten by anger, Sticking his pride out like a finger ; No mercy will be drawn out of him, Singing like ...

Would this be related to Black Beauty? (I'm referencing the only literature about horses I know). I see a lot of potential here. But there are some confusing elements, as ...

Simple and sweet. I like these very much. Since your title for these is "blurbs", are you planning on expanding from here? They all look like they can be great ...

Creative. The best ideas can come from the most random things :) Certainly very good questions to ask a pitcher. I enjoyed the smooth transition from slightly comical to much ...