inprisonforsparkling

Hi Messenger!! Ollie here with a review! I love this poem, it's so short and sweet. The alliteration is a really nice touch and as the other reviewer here said, ...

Hi there!! Ollie here with a review for the review day! I really like this story, it's short and sweet :D Cecily is such a lovely, cute guy, filled with ...

This is so good!!! I adore blackout poetry, and doing it repeatedly with one sentence is such a cool idea! The gradual expansion on this character, using only the same ...

Hi there HildegardHope! Ollie here with a review!! I absolutely love this poem! The story of Pygmalion always did stick out to me from the myths — he agonizes but ...

Hi there Avian! Ollie here with a review! First off, I really like the voice and the world you've built here. Athiya is a great narrator and main character so ...

Hi there! Oliver here with a review! First of all, what an opener - "Let’s put it this way, I didn’t want to kill Jackie Arcdale, and I knew damn ...

Hi there, it's Oliver with a review!! I really love the style here, parentheses are one of my favorite devices in both poetry and prose. I feel like the emotion ...

Ohhh this is beautiful!! "Rain is when she came to me" is such an evocative and lovely line; i really like the subtle rhyming through the poem, as well. "brown ...

Oh my god I love Greek mythology references SO MUCH you don't even know. Hi Plume!! Oliver here with a review!! First off, I really love the allusions, as you ...

Hi again Horisun! First of all, I really like this chapter!! I think you definitely gave Kim a more consistent voice this chapter, if that makes sense. I think you ...

Hi Horisun!! So I'd like to start by saying I really like the writing in this. You've given Kim a very strong voice, and the introduction is excellent, it immediately ...

Wow, this is really good! I kind of see it as writer's block, and it's a really interesting way of describing it. I honestly can't think of any criticisms at ...