inkwell

What Apple said, welcome to YWS!

Laughed the whole way through! On the dot hilarity.

Well I was inspired mostly by wine tasting as an art form and I wanted to poetically describe my experience. The first stanza was describing the wine being poured, the ...

Revised the story with both of your criticisms in mind and an extra spelling/grammar sweep. :)

i'm guessing you really like marmalade? haha personally i can't stand the stuff, but if you're willing to write about it, i'm willing to read about it. so at first ...

Excellent poem! It is very well written with great scheme. While reading it I could feel the warmth and chills that you provoked. Third stanza is my favorite. :)

A very random poem. Let me elaborate: Random? The whole poem is a response to the proposition, If I could be paper And my blood could be ink And my ...

Cool analysis of a very analysis-worthy speech! I personally love the speech as well and had to analyze it in English this year. He was a great president.

Thanks Matt for the positive feedback! I purposely made short lines so I could challenge my self to make the most out of limited word count. Maybe I will have ...

Thanks for the feedback everyone! :) Hi inkwell! Are you new to YWS? If so, welcome! This was very good! I agree with Matt Bellamy. You have a fantastic word ...

Dear Classy, "This was the biggest problem in your story. You introduce too many chapters for your first chapter, if this is what it is." Typo? :P Nice call on ...

Hiya Inkwell! You know, I never seemed to mention how much I love your avatar. Brian is totally the best thing since pancakes. So, anyway, on to the review. I ...

Your poem was good. I feel your situation. The only thing that keeps the knife at bay is the animal instinct to preserve ourselves. So I'm an Epicurean at heart.

The story plot as a whole left me a little confused, but that might just be me, so don't take it too seriously. Just something to consider... Yeah I was ...

Rose pretty much said anything I would of said and put it better as well. The subject of mortality is a very narrow one and is a very personal thing ...