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Over- -Head This poem was intelligently rhythmic and had an oracular but human voice. The surreal imagery is the emotional underscore for me when I read it. One thing I ...

Hey, dante. First I want to address some technical stuff. Your style is inconsistent. At parts you capitalize the first letter of a line, and at other parts you don't. ...

Hello mello! I enjoyed reading your poem because the pacing was just as if dog-walking and your descriptions were clear and transposing. I think some editing is in order, trim ...

bumped so you might get another review :) On the swings kicking higher and higher, gazelle legs running into the sun and surf This image is fantastic. The lines' rhythm ...

Lumi is probably right, so for now I'm only reviewing the first poem. I may come back to tackle the second though! :) Opening couplet and following two lines are ...

Hello, Lumi! :) This is great here. First stanza is fantastic. Overall you've achieved some excellent imagery, tone, and voice. I get that this is a letter addressed to someone. ...

Good Evening, Apple Core! :p The introduction was very well done. But why would a genius problem-solver not just invent a coffee maker for home? I get that you're saying ...

They’re almost like clouds, they’re so unstable, so quick to fade when touched; This analogy and image is dead on, I love it. It makes your opening very strong for ...

Love this poem but don't have the time to go into depth so I'm just making you aware of a few errors. we manger on crouton topics that crunch with ...

This is a short poem so I don't have much to say. First of all I thought that it was too dominated by questions, but it worked thanks to your ...

This poem is all over the place. It's interesting but only gets good in the last stanza. The title itself prepares the reader for a forced poem. I get that ...

this fugue is as all oceans except with fewer stashed, nacre huts * a conchology in which i press my ear less to the tide's zonophone * , the dragging ...

I don't like poetry slams, so I read this simply as a spoken word poem. The important part, though, is that this poem is very much intended to be spoken. ...

If I'm being body dumped in a ditch: why am I naked if I'm not dead? Change that to "body-dumped" in this context. "I have --something you want--." "—something I ...

United we stand For I will forever hold you hand In this graying bliss With your sweetest kiss We can forever be Together; just you and me No complications, Or ...