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Re: Starfall - Chapter 1.4 (Elliott)
Hey, Querencia! Storm here for another review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! “The question is why would you do that?” he replied in a snarky ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: To Kill A Mockingbird: From Text to Cinema
Hey, FalconerGal9086! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! To Kill A Mockingbird is a masterfully crafted story, in which characters have ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: A Dishonorable Pact With Solitude
Hey there, Cub! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's just jump right into this! In the first paragraph, you start five sentences in a similar ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: The Gravedigger
Hey, Aleta! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Husky laughter and wheezing was often heard when the sun dropped from its ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: walking into the road
Hey hey hey! It's (definitely not Fat Albert as I am small, white, and female) Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: The Piano's Tune
Hey, kaializzy! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Although it was missing a leg, it still stood upright. I consider myself ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Wonderland
Hey, woahhitherepal! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day. This review is going to be rather short, and for that I'm sorry, but to be fair, there's not ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: To Be a Millionaire pt. 2
Hey rosette! Storm back for another review this fine Review Day, so let's jump in, yet again! Fillmore shivered. Then eyed the driver just as cynically. He refused to be ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: To Be a Millionaire pt. 1
Hey, rosette! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Unfortunately, he could not remember the low. I don't really see the necessity ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Tani
Hi, singhvaibhav, and welcome to YWS! Storm here to review your story, so let's jump right into it! A veneer of malice clings to her face, with incorporeal coercion she ...
Oct 18, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 2 (Jason Volks)
Hey hey, Hatt. Storm back for another review, so let's jump into it! His sickness was getting slightly worse, as sicknesses usually do when they have just begun. I just ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 1 (Renegade Sneeze)
Yo, Hatt! Storm here to review! These reviews will probably be relatively short, but I hope I touch on something helpful. Avery Trent sat in his kitchen one gloomy, rainy ...
Oct 3, 2017 -
Re: The Ballad of the Brenerit Curfew - Chapter 2.1
Hey, Bisc! Sorry, I didn't get to this sooner, but school has been kicking my butt lately. She couldn’t imagine what it would be like to be as dependent on ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 10.1
AHHHHHH! I already knew you were going to post this, but boy am I excited to see my boys again. (Imma skim the chapter before this for a quick refresher, ...
Sep 11, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 6 - Black Blood
Hey, AneiDoru! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll try my best to follow what's happening. Fira was ...
Sep 11, 2017