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Hey Bisc! I'm super pumped to read this! I didn’t mean to sound quite as sarky as I did, and he grabbed his phone back quite sharply. I'm sure you ...

Hey, rosette! Storm here for another review, so let's get to it. Papa turned the wheel sharply to the right, and the van bounced off the pot-holed dirt road into ...

Hey, Radrook! Storm here to give the work the boot from the Green Room, so let's get to it! and then Jehovah said to me: “You will when all is ...

Hey, Trashcan! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. Since this chapter seemed so short, I went ahead and read the ones before it to get ...

Yo, Lizz! I decided to leave this a review, so here we go. It wasn’t like I hadn’t spent my whole life getting to this point, going through the years ...

Hiya, Junel! Storm here for a review, so let's begin! She was bad, simple as that. You change pronouns here, and it's a bit confusing. At first, you're talking about ...

Hey, rosette! Storm here to review, so let's get into it! I'm not going to put it all in a quote, but I don't know how I feel about the ...

Hey, wordwing! Storm here for a review like promised, so let's jump right in! Birds are chirping on a nearby tree and I can smell the scent of beautiful purple ...

Hey, uncletoyo! Storm here for a review, so let's get into it! Before I say anything else, I want to mention the punctuation in the dialogue. It's all wrong. It's ...

Heya, Slobst! Storm here to review, as requested. I just want to say that I've never written or reviewed a script, so I might be utterly unhelpful. With that said, ...

Hey, TysonJames! Storm here for a review, so let's begin! Have you ever noticed that waiter in that fancy restaurant, who responds to all your calls, and obeys each and ...

hey, Flumadiddle! Storm here for a review to contribute to clearing out the Green Room, so let's get started, shall we? I'm sure you know this, but I've never read ...

Hey, vannilawriter! Storm here for a review! Just a quick note before I begin this review: if you are considering suicide, know that it's a permanent solution to a problem ...

Hey, Amindor! Storm here for a review, so let's get right into it! The night is all that seems to be present, This seems a strange, roundabout way of putting ...

Hi, DemonGoddess! Storm here to leave a review as requested, so let's begin. E.E. grabbed a book out of her bag. Frayed, torn, and with an orange horse and jokey ...