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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Off Court - 10.2

    Hey Bisc! I'm super pumped to read this! I didn’t mean to sound quite as sarky as I did, and he grabbed his phone back quite sharply. I'm sure you ...

    Jan 19, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Cedar Ravine: 2.2

    Hey, rosette! Storm here for another review, so let's get to it. Papa turned the wheel sharply to the right, and the van bounced off the pot-holed dirt road into ...

    Jan 18, 2018

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    Re: I saw Jehova’s armies

    Hey, Radrook! Storm here to give the work the boot from the Green Room, so let's get to it! and then Jehovah said to me: “You will when all is ...

    Jan 17, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Hey, Trashcan! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. Since this chapter seemed so short, I went ahead and read the ones before it to get ...

    Jan 16, 2018

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: c

    Yo, Lizz! I decided to leave this a review, so here we go. It wasn’t like I hadn’t spent my whole life getting to this point, going through the years ...

    Jan 11, 2018

  • Short Story » General, Dramatic
    Re: Doorstep Smiles

    Hiya, Junel! Storm here for a review, so let's begin! She was bad, simple as that. You change pronouns here, and it's a bit confusing. At first, you're talking about ...

    Jan 11, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Cedar Ravine: 2.1

    Hey, rosette! Storm here to review, so let's get into it! I'm not going to put it all in a quote, but I don't know how I feel about the ...

    Jan 10, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: The world I live in Ch 3

    Hey, wordwing! Storm here for a review like promised, so let's jump right in! Birds are chirping on a nearby tree and I can smell the scent of beautiful purple ...

    Jan 10, 2018

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor
    Re: The Girl Of My Dreams

    Hey, uncletoyo! Storm here for a review, so let's get into it! Before I say anything else, I want to mention the punctuation in the dialogue. It's all wrong. It's ...

    Jan 8, 2018

  • Script » Film, Teen Fiction
    Re: Grow Out - First Scene

    Heya, Slobst! Storm here to review, as requested. I just want to say that I've never written or reviewed a script, so I might be utterly unhelpful. With that said, ...

    Jan 8, 2018

  • Article / Essay » General, General
    Re: Hospitality, Education and Career

    Hey, TysonJames! Storm here for a review, so let's begin! Have you ever noticed that waiter in that fancy restaurant, who responds to all your calls, and obeys each and ...

    Jan 7, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 10

    hey, Flumadiddle! Storm here for a review to contribute to clearing out the Green Room, so let's get started, shall we? I'm sure you know this, but I've never read ...

    Jan 6, 2018

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: A Short walk To An Icy Lake

    Hey, vannilawriter! Storm here for a review! Just a quick note before I begin this review: if you are considering suicide, know that it's a permanent solution to a problem ...

    Jan 6, 2018

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General
    Re: They're Watching

    Hey, Amindor! Storm here for a review, so let's get right into it! The night is all that seems to be present, This seems a strange, roundabout way of putting ...

    Jan 5, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure
    Re: Grim Demons Chapter One: Sloth

    Hi, DemonGoddess! Storm here to leave a review as requested, so let's begin. E.E. grabbed a book out of her bag. Frayed, torn, and with an orange horse and jokey ...

    Jan 4, 2018


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler