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Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Ten
Hey, ScarlettFire! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Now, I haven't been following this novel, so forgive me if I have ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: The Whispering Pine
Hey, midnightdreary! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! The pine waits slowly Waits for what? I'm not sure that this is ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Derek
Hello, Kazeybear. Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I took the liberty of looking up the photos and the story behind ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Infinitesimals
Hey, Nikayla! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! In the first stanza it is clear to me that you love your ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Welcome to the Show!
Hey, Ineedy0u. Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! The searing hot metal eats away my flesh and clothes and leaves singe ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Only words
Hey, FizzyGirl! What a time you dropped into! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! Wow, first off, this is one big ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Stuck
Hey, SarukaTheHuman. Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! This is a really short poem, so this will be a fairly short ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch10 Pt2
Hey Child! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! The practitioner pouted. “That’s quite untrue. You will have tell me it was ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: partial/heaving.
Hey, amie salami! Anna banana here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! First and foremost, your language is on point. It seems that every poem you ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: New vs Old and Loyal
Hey, Aubrey7! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. I just want you to know that I will definitely sound harsh in this review. I'm not ...
Apr 26, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 81
Hey, Lumi! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! I'll try to critique on the things you're looking for, so here goes! (and praised the ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: The Reckless Years: Chapter 1 Part 3
Hey, BubblegumGoddess! Storm here for (yet another) review, so let's jump right into it! “But the front door is so predictable and boring.” Marley groaned then glanced down at the ...
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch10 Pt1
Hi, CoN! Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! Azrael sat on the bed with the captain’s hat on her lap, and listened to the ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: The Reckless Years: Chapter 1 Part 2
Hello again, BubblegumGoddess. I just finished with your first chapter when I saw that you had posted this, so I decided to review this too. Anywhen, let's jump right into ...
Apr 22, 2017 -
Re: The Reckless Years: Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey, BubblegumGoddess! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! Yet, believing the reputation of Marley Spencer was a norm. First off, this is a fragment. ...
Apr 22, 2017
