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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Or So I Thought

    I love so many bits and pieces of this poem, but overall it doesn't strike me as a particularly engaging piece. I really like the lines, my mind has shattered ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hungry

    This poem has some wonderful lines in it, and your use of simile is absolutely astounding. My favorite lines were: I try to speak but words I long to say ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: no athiests in foxholes

    Hello! (: Other than the spelling error Mia has already pointed out, I found this poem to be incredibly well written. Something I would try to focus on is increasing ...

    Nov 13, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Curious Incident Of The Dog In The Night-time

    I loved this book. I picked it up at a thrift store without knowing anything about it and I was so glad I did, it's definitely one of my all ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Two.

    This was absolutely amazing. I think it really captures the feelings and confusion that come with having to make a difficult choice, especially when it comes to loved ones. I ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Absence

    Amazing. I love it. It's a breath of fresh air from a lot of the other work I have seen here, and I'm not saying that to be mean, I'm ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Tainted

    I like this as an introduction, it flows nicely and to the point. There's not a lot of background information, but in this case I find that good as it's ...

    Jan 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Numb (Chapter 1)

    Ahh, this is my very first post on this site, so I hope I can do this right. xD Anyways, I found this piece to be very interesting, though kind ...

    Jan 21, 2008


The opposite of belonging is fitting in.
— Dr. BrenĂ© Brown