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Re: Or So I Thought
I love so many bits and pieces of this poem, but overall it doesn't strike me as a particularly engaging piece. I really like the lines, my mind has shattered ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Hungry
This poem has some wonderful lines in it, and your use of simile is absolutely astounding. My favorite lines were: I try to speak but words I long to say ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: no athiests in foxholes
Hello! (: Other than the spelling error Mia has already pointed out, I found this poem to be incredibly well written. Something I would try to focus on is increasing ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: The Curious Incident Of The Dog In The Night-time
I loved this book. I picked it up at a thrift store without knowing anything about it and I was so glad I did, it's definitely one of my all ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Two.
This was absolutely amazing. I think it really captures the feelings and confusion that come with having to make a difficult choice, especially when it comes to loved ones. I ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: An Absence
Amazing. I love it. It's a breath of fresh air from a lot of the other work I have seen here, and I'm not saying that to be mean, I'm ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Tainted
I like this as an introduction, it flows nicely and to the point. There's not a lot of background information, but in this case I find that good as it's ...
Jan 21, 2008 -
Re: Numb (Chapter 1)
Ahh, this is my very first post on this site, so I hope I can do this right. xD Anyways, I found this piece to be very interesting, though kind ...
Jan 21, 2008
