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Hey there, I really Like this. It flows well, and drew me in. It's up to you if you want to continue it. It could work well as a short ...

Wow. I loved this piece. You description was beautiful, and the situation was highly realistic. The whole peice flowed together well. I felt like I was there in the room ...

*dies laughing* This made my day

These are awesome! I have been following them since you started. :) Great job! Poem

I love this! I thought it was great, and I knew that is was about the Holocaust by the end. I can't say much more. Keep up the great work! ...

I really liked this! I don't have much else to say, but you could break it into stanzas. ~Poem

I really liked this poem. I thought that it flowed fairly well and the rhyme fit well too. Well done, ~Poem

what happened to the surprise? Was that just to get him out of bed? Do we hear about it later? Maybe I'm just being ridiculous; but I was exited for ...

*gold star*

*Does a happy dance, and tackleglopms* I couldn't find anything else, but I am so happy that you are out of your writers block!

I's are capitalized, because they are a proper noun.

Great poem! Although, I would add some punctuation, and capitalize the first letter in each line.

I probably should have explained that this is something that is based on my book.

*sorry for my pitiful review* I only have three words to say... I loved it! :D

Did you write that poem/ song? It reminds me of something written by Lifehouse.