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Thank you so much for your review :)

Thank you so much, I haven't thought about it like that. Perhaps I'll change it to first-person, I do agree that that'll make it much more personal and perhaps like ...

Thank you so much

Wow thank you so much, that's so kind of you!! I would be absolutely happy to create more short stories using this character. Thank you so much for your kind ...

Thank you so much for the review

The ending left it on a very high note. What did the principal write on the board and who told the parents to come to the school? Keep writing :)

Thank you so much, I hope you are too :)

Thank you so much, that's so kind of you

Thank you so much

Thank you so much for you review :)

What is your main story? What moral will the reader have when they read this book? Perhaps, what might help, is writing a blurb. Write a summary on what you ...

I think the title 'The good and the bad news' is more applicable to something devastating happening. Maybe you could have something that represents her shock as a character-'Crime and ...

Awesome, I'm glad that I could help :)

Your story keeps on improving with each chapter!! I don't have time to do a review now, but will do asap when I can :)

Sure will do