-
Re: The Happy
I love it, I love it, I love it! My cat was sitting on my lap while I read this and she had to get up because I was shaking ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: ...
That was great, I don't have much time to write an actual review, though I doubt you need it right now, considering all the reviews you've already recieved. But I ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Who am I?
Wow, that is really good! Who am I? I am a girl with poetry pulsing through her veins with eyes that seek inspiration That would make a bit more sense ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: ..
There's nothing really to say because everything has already been said! Your an amazing writer and I love this! It's quite uplifting and makes you feel all good inside =] ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: The Ugly Truth
Good story so far, just make sure you reread it for simple mistakes. I think the part where she told her parents that she was pregnant went a little fast, ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Bloom and Die
Oh My Gosh! That was literally the most amazing thing I have ever read! I don't know of any mistakes or anything! It was AMAZING! I love it! I'm sorry, ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to Hell
OK, so I saw how long this was on the, what would you call it, top 5 thing. So I decided to read it. I have to say that I ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: .
I'm afraid that I'm not the best at actually editing it. I'm more of a Give-My-Opinion kind of person. So, my opinion is that it is good! I really like ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: "It's the Rules!"
Helloooo, Everything about the story was already talked about so I'll just give you my opinion. It sucked JUST KIDDING! I loved it! You have a knack at writing and ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Bye for now. Part II
Hey, OK so first of l I would like to say that I'm not the best reviewer/editor person, just putting that out there. But I can say that some parts ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Love Chapter 1
Since everyone already pointed out the mistakes and everything, I'll just give you my opinion on the idea... I liked it! It was of course messy in some areas that ...
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Pugna: Chapter 1
Hi, So I read this chapter and I thought it was pretty good! I would defiantly suggest rereading it though. We all make our mistakes so just make sure you ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Pugna: Introduction
I have to say that I really quite enjoyed that beginning, it makes someone want to keep reading. The only realy advice I can give you is to reread your ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: So Beautiful, So Dead Chapter One
OK, so first of all I would like to point out to you that when someone is talking you write it like Under my breath I said "That house with ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: Party
Wow, I really liked that. You have a way of writing that is so good, I wish I could describe things without overdescribing them like you can! You can describe ...
Apr 21, 2010
