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I liked it, but just make sure that you don't capitalize seasons. And I didn't really like the placement of Fall, because for me it seemed like you were trying ...

Hey Skins, Well, first of all I'd like to say: THANK YOU! For posting it, I needed to at least make sure he didn't, like, die! Anyway, back to the ...

Because everyone has already critiqued this, I have to say one last thing. I FREAKING LOVE THIS! I started reading these chapters one at a time this morning, but was ...

♥♥♥ Keep Writing! “upon my gracious entering, please help me find what I missed her on Earth." This I had to reread a few times... It was a bit confusing, ...

I like the 6 year old version, it reminds me of some of the stuff I used to do. Not the whole not making sense part, but the simplicity that ...

This is what I like. It's real, relatable, and very well written. I can't really say anything negative, because I couldn't find anything negative.Except for there was one part "Images ...

It's definitely a new kind of story for me. I'm usually one too read the love stories or something, but I enjoyed this. I felt like I was there kind ...

Hey kakagirl! Here on request, and just to let you know, I am following you. I know, stalker, right? Anyway, first of all I'd like to say that I do ...

This was a good chapter, good plot, good idea. Alex seems like the good girl, like Rosey Unicorn said, a Mary Sue. Show us some flaws! Jon is perfect, on ...

This is a really moving peice, bravo! I can't really say anything bad about it, it seemed all fine. The beat and rhyming all seemed fine. And so did the ...

Wow, this is good. It would be nice to avtually hear the beat and everything, but the lyrics are nice, realiztic, and very relatable. And I liked the part about ...

I liked this. I know what it feels like to be stabbed in the back by a "friend". Granted, I was in fourth grade and a girl told someone who ...

I would write every little thing I found wrong in this, just because that's how I am, but it seems as if everyone else has done it for me! I'd ...

It's a good poem, nicely described. I feel like I was in the hallway, like I could see everything going on. But I don't know if it's just me, but ...

Hey! So, I started to lose interest after she wokeup because you're always describing everything. Yes, it helps me imagine what it would look like, but not in a good ...