iheartbooks

This is really good, I really like this piece. I can feel the emotion in it. However, the way the lines are broken up seems a little choppy or awkward ...

So this is a good story, sort of a fable in the way that it has a lesson attached to it. Overall, I like it. It's nice and good to ...

Aww, this is sad. It was great though. And I loved the idea behind it. Hey, not all stories have happy endings. Most of the good stories don't. Romeo and ...

It's good. I love reading Harry Potter too! There are a few mistakes though. Mostly grammer. First, reread it all through and decide where to put the commas at the ...

Oh. My. Gosh. I got to the end and I'm what the heck? Why did it stop? And then I remembered that this is YWS and it's not finished yet. ...

Hi, I'm Leah, I'm gonna review your lovely peice of work here. First off, let me just say that I love your vocabulary in this. I especially enjoyed that you ...

It's got good... what to call it... I'll just explain it good. This is a skeleton. It's sturdy and well-built. Now you need to add meat to the bones. The ...

I liked it, I really did. The only part that kind of threw me off and made me reread it again was the third to last line. You came up ...

Ugh! I would freak out if my inernet connection died. FREAK OUT! lol, I loved this, I thought you were talking about something really big, like what anyone would think ...

I love the simplicity. But it's totally relatable and tells us something that could otherwise take a whole page in just four lines. Bravo. It's easy to understand and I ...

ooh! Plot twist! I must say though that this chapter went by fast and you didn't really give much imagery, which is usually needed to have a really good peice ...

Hey Alzora. I'm iheartbooks and I'll review your story. This may be a little long, but, you know, it's a review. Umm... red is my stuff. I stepped off the ...

Hey theotherone, One thing is, yeah, werewolves were kind of sudden. Now I'm not saying it's totally messing up the story because it is the story, right? But you can't ...

hI TheOtherOne, Well, first of all, I don't really know what to say about this. It was good, don't get me wrong there, just kind of confusing. So the beginning ...

I don't have time for a full review. But I liked it, and I didn't think it was totally info dumping. But it had good info. But I have to ...