icaruswithoutwings

Thank you for the review! I appreciate all the advice and will take it into consideration.

Thank you so much for this detailed review! I'm glad you enjoyed it and i will take everything into consideration!

Thank you for the review! Your take is really great! I'd say the biggest theme of this poem is insecurity, so you can honestly take that and frame it anyway. ...

Hi thank you for reviewing! And I agree, the structure is definitely not perfect, I like the concept of this poem a lot, but I did write it a few ...

Hi thank you for your review! This work was just to practice describing things really, but I appreciate all your comments and will take all of them into consideration! Thank ...

Thank you for your comment! I really love how you broke everything down. Also lol, I actually didn't notice I rhymed "side" and "behind," it's so cool you picked up ...

Yes, the speaker is definitely trying to be like him! I will be posting more, thank you for commenting!

Thank you so much! I would have definitely tagged insecurity if I could, that played a big role in the speakers journey. The title, Pale Yellow, is also definitely metaphorical. ...

Hi, I really like this! This feels so reminiscent, as someone who struggles with sh (getting better) nice representation like this makes me and likely many others feel seen. The ...

Thank you so much! This is my first work posted so I was a bit nervous, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Your understanding of the poem is really ...

Hi I absolutely love this interpretation! This is the first work I've ever posted on here so its really nice to have such a nice detailed comment on my work ...

Hello! I really liked this! Your descriptions of everything happening around you are really great, they put a clear image in my mind and I felt like I was experiencing ...