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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The World Inside

    Although this is short, and I usually don't like short poems unless the message is very strong. I must say I really enjoyed this. There are a few grammar errors. ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Wish

    This really made me feel a various amount of emotions. This was a very nice read. You can really feel your emotions in your words. I honestly have no complaints ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh Night

    Ohhh, I really enjoyed this. You have quite a way with words. As stated below you use a lot of beautiful imagery. This poem shows a variety of emotions which ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Glass

    This was nice for being so short. Short and sweet, I must say. I feel there is some hidden message or hidden emotion behind this poem. I like that. I ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: so your thinking about me

    Hello there :) This was a nice little poem. I honestly didn't like how you added the ... I didn't feel it was necessary or correct grammar wise. You have ...

    Dec 5, 2013


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