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Yey ! The part two!... It is not boring ! Very interesting and I want to read some more! The clergy man's personality was shown well. I think I should ...

A huh ... I think you had separated this one from your novel, when you are going to post a part of your novel there should be a blue dialog ...

Interesting story, so your main character will be the daughter right? Hmmm... It is too short even for a prologue, but nice it is interesting :) It has potential to ...

Oh! I'm very touched that you wrote for your dog. And with that being said, I think that with this piece, you put strong emotions... I'm in tears even though ...

My mind became too crowded with all the descriptions given. I cant imagine the place and the situations very clear, just in my opinion or maybe my mind was already ...

I love this poem! I was like singing the part " I dont wanna wear my pants anymore, I dont wanna wear my pants anymore!" It is so hilarious! That ...

My Review: The story truly happens in real life. But this was quite a cliche. i already had a scholarship for Harvard and on top of that i was the ...

Ok so here is the part 2... A god saved me? What the heck does that mean? Did I actually die then? Should I be with Aiden right now? Oh ...

Hey I love this one ! One of my favorites! You think it is boring? I WILL SAY A BIG NO !!! The story is very interesting, some kind of ...

I can feel the dismay of the speaker about failure. Well actually, I can relate to your poem. I had faced many failures in my life and... and... Anyway, Just ...

I liked this poem... but I agree with this one It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and consistent- It is distracting and takes away from the ...

Ok in the first part I said that I am confused if Riley is a girl or a boy. Now I know that she s Female ;) lol haha, by ...

WOW ! I love how you open your story. It caught my attention. I love this one, I enjoyed reading it ! And you are so good, I hope I ...

I am very interested with this short story. Content Wise it was very good ! However I do agree with larztheloser I feel the need to criticize a few aspects ...

D'awww, this was so cute. Awkward and sweet and incredibly nervous. I like. tape/glue Mm, I don't really like that slash in there. It just feels too, I dunno, technical ...